Given
this information, write a short hard news story.
Event: An old man saves a much younger man from drowning
in a river.
Time: Friday afternoon
Place: Wabash River
People: Derek Simms (72 year old fisherman) Chris Martin (college
student)
Facts: Martin was out for a walk along the river with his friend, Rich
Barden.
Simms was fishing nearby.
Four people have drowned in the river in the last six years.
Quotes:
Simms: “I
had been out fishing since about eight-thirty in the morning. It was kind of a nice warm day, so I thought I’d stay
out all day. Anyway about eleven o’clock, I saw two young guys walking down the path. They seemed like city boys who didn’t really know much about
the countryside, so I thought I’d watch them. You never know what kind of trouble kids like that can get into. So, pretty
soon, I hear this big splash and one of the young guys yelling. I ran down the river a little bit and saw one in the river
and the other standing on the side yelling ‘Help him. Neither of us can swim!’ Without even thinking, I just jumped
in after him. I’ve lived by the river my whole life - been swimming since
I was little. I didn’t stop to think if it was dangerous for an old guy like me.”
Martin: “Rich and I were playing around on the
rocks at the edge of the river. I guess we got a little silly and careless, because I slipped on one and fell in the water.
I’ve never learned how to swim and my leg was hurt pretty bad by the fall. I tried to stay above water, but I couldn’t.
If Mr. Simms hadn’t pulled me out, I’d probably not be here.”
Barden: “We brought some lunch with us that day.
We had sandwiches and some fruit. I put it on the ground and we started messing around, pushing each other and throwing water
on each other – just playing. Maybe it was a little my fault, because I pushed Chris pretty hard when he fell. I can’t
swim, so I couldn’t go in after him. Then the old guy would have needed to rescue both of us. Anyway, when Chris fell,
he splashed water all over our lunch. I was hungry the rest of the day.”